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Alright, here we go!

So, this is the comic I've been working on lately. I haven't planned to make it a very detailed comic, but rather one that is a bit rough. Why? Because I'm a lazy bum and I want to produce pages fast enough without having to put my entire soul in each page, and so that you guys don't have to wait years for an update Plus, this is my first multi-paged comic, and I don't want to begin with something too complex; (maybe for future comics?) I want to first practice on expressions and poses, and to draw the same characters over and over again. So when (if) that comes easier for me, I can focus more on coloring and shading if I ever decide to do other comics in the future

Also, I've been very uncertain about how to execute this comic. I mean, whether to do shading only, color it black and white, fully color with only one color, leave it without colors, having borders or not... I ended up with shading and no borders >.> And decided to do handwriting on the text, since I thought it would fit the "roughness" of the comic better ^^ (Warning! Numbers of panels per page will vary.)
But I am still not certain if this is the best, so I want to ask you guys what you think; is there anything I should change? I am willing to do adjustments, but I still want to keep things simple.

Also, if you find it difficult to read, or if you see any spelling errors; please tell me, and I'll fix it

Oki, I suppose that was all the technical stuff.   

Yes, this is a crossover comic between Alice: Madness Returns and Don't Starve. Everything happens in a universe where fictional characters can interact with the real world, or they act like imaginary friends... sorta...kinda O_o Okay, I haven't quite defined this world but it was the only one where I could picture these characters together in, since they come from different eras and all.
Oh! And yeah, I'm there too :I Sorry about that... maybe you'll understand further in to the story.

Phew! That was a long description. Anyways, safe journey to everyone who decides to step into this madness  I don't expect this comic to get a lot of reviews, (since I think it's a very unknown crossover) But I hope that those people who take their time on reading it enjoys it

EDIT: I think I'll scribble the parts which are black from now on :3

Don't Starve (c) Klei Entertainment
American McGee's Alice/ Alice Madness Returns (c) Spicy Horse & American McGee
Comic (c) Me